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Post  gregsgirl on November 26th 2008, 1:06 pm

guys my first ff don't laugh

Chapter 1.

As I strolled down to the sandy shore, I could feel the salty breeze softly hit my face. My gloved hands tightly held onto my silver case which held everything I need to go to work. A heavy camera hung from my neck and weighed me down. The sun glasses that grip my face tightly were slowly fogging up with the salt spray. My job maybe a bit different to other peoples, but it helps society either way. Finally climbing my way up a dune, the salty breeze turns into a grotesque musk as my job for the day comes into view. A mans naked body lay spraled on the shore. My coworkers have already made it to the scene.
"What happend here?" I say as I duck under the yellow police tape. David was examining the body, noteing everything down as he saw something new. He looked up and smiled his cheesy grin.
"My job is to find out what happend to him, your job is to find out what happend here." He smirked and fixed up his glasses. I shake my head and kneel next to him.
"T.O.D?" I manage to splutter as the smell of the decaying body makes its way up my nose. David always made fun of me. Even after fives years on the C.S.I team, I still cant stand the smell of death.
"Well, according to his liver temperature..around 24 hours ago." He chuckles and gets back down to work. I grab onto my camera and start to take pictures of the scene. The body had no visible signs of injury, except for the right leg being missing. The wound looks post mortum, but I cant be sure. I look around the body and there is no evidence what so ever. I sigh and keep taking photo's.
"Did you find a wallet or any I.D on the body?" My attention was caught by a bruise on his wrist. David looked up from his work and shook his head.
"Nope. This is how we found him, maybe he was from a nudist camp?" He smiles and calls the coroner to take the body away.
"Hey, I found this near the body" Nick came running up from the waters edge holding a piece of material.
"Looks like the interior of a car" I look closely at the pice of materiel that Nick handed to me. It was a dark blue color with dark red spots on it. Nick had already got a swab out and wiped it across a few times. I opened my case and took out a spray bottle full of lumonal. I spray it on the swab Nick took, and within seconds its turned bright pink.
"I'll take it back to the lab and get Greg to analyse the blood." I grab a small plastic zip lock bag and dorp the material in.
"You might want to take this back as well. I don't think the vic has long red hair." Nick waved another zip lock bag that contained a long strand of red hair. I take it out of his hands and put it in my case.
"Any other evidence of another person that could be involved?" Nick shrugged.
"Not to sure yet. Looks to me like someone killed him, then threw him in the ocean. This isn't the murder scene." We both begin to walk to my car.
"Cause of death?" I say as I open the door.
"Blood forced traumer to the head I assume. This guy didnt want to go down easy. There were three visible contusions to the back of his head, but we cant be sure untill the autopsy's been done." He handed me my case and I shut the door. I look at him threw the open window.
"Or maybe our killer wanted to make sure he was dead?" I say over my sunnies as I drive back to the lab.

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